Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Now for a ''poem'' (that doesn't rhyme really), full of second meanings! Can you see 'em?

Second Meanings
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Do you cry yourself to sleep every night?
Do you just not see the point
in going any further?

Do you see strange visions from the past
filled with joy and happiness
to which you can't relate?

Do you think to yourself: ''Leave me alone!
How dare you come in my dreams
and torture me???''

Do you feel like dancing like some do
to forget your pain and to remember
your pleasures from years ago?

unfinished version (probably will stay that way)

Didn't that just suck!?! Not only did it NOT rhyme, but there are no rhythm to it either!!! The last refrain was invented on the spot. Might finish it if someone COMMENTS!!!!!!!

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